Flutterlane Part 6"PINKIE" Twilight and Rarity shouted in harmony.The pink party pony wiped her hoof on the grass a few more times, quite rapidly."Coming!" She yelled back, beginning to hop along as if nothing had happened, and she hadn't one care in the world."Not far ta' go, gals!" AJ panted, nearing the huge building.Twilight opened the doors to the hospital quickly and the three mares trotted in, gasping for their breaths."Miss...Miss!" Twilight said, hoping to catch the attention of the receptionist. Upon the mare's suit, read a badge that said "Dr. Stargale" Her eyes were dark purple, and shone as they peered up at Twilight Sparkle. "Can I help
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