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Morning Stroll - Celestiacord by SJArt117 Morning Stroll - Celestiacord by SJArt117
A piece I've been meaning to get done for a long while now, it's adolescent Celestia and Discord having a morning stroll in crisp fresh springtime.

For *PoshPete117


100%Mspaint.

(C) *S-J-Art MLPFIM Hasbro

Edit: Changed wings..

Edit.2: Changed mane colours slightly..
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Critique by ZontarZon Jul 1, 2012, 11:06:23 AM
"Morning Stroll" is a very cute picture, and what's more impressive is that it is made in 100% MS Paint. As many know, it takes an incredible amount of time and effort to create an MS Painting; as a fellow MS Painter, I fully understand this and respect S-J-Art for being so talented.

This picture looks a lot like the actual show, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. The style of the scenery and characters is incorporated perfectly in the background as well as in the anatomy and facial features of the characters. It is as if you are looking at a screenshot or a tidbit of the show itself.

As for other things, what I would recommend for change is the anatomy of Princess Celestia. Her back legs are proportioned in a very awkward way; that is, they are too high up in the air. Also, the curvature of a pony's back can also be better shown to improve the quality of Celestia's anatomy.

The wings on Celestia stem from a place that isn't the back. Rather, it seems as if they stem from the armpit...?

After seeing this picture, it occurred to me that you tried shading the characters. From what I see, the shading itself isn't the problem; it's that you can barely see that you have shaded. I would recommend that the shading be darker and easier to find.

Over all, it is very impressive. I am looking forward to seeing more of S-J-Art's works in the near future.
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Wow I live how this looks! I especially love how you did a wide screen touch to it!

Although there are somethings wrong with it that i would like to point out.

Celestia's Wings are awkwardly placed. I can see that she is flying upside down but i did not notice at first. Maybe you could make the wings a bit lower from the body?

Her hooves, when i say this i mean the one behind her head. At first i thought it was an awkwardly drawn ear because of its placing, maybe you could re place it so that you could see more of the arm?

Other than those few problems, this is a beautiful piece of work to had of been done in MS paint. I love everything else about it other than the few problems! (i especially love how you did your line work!

I hope my critique will help you in the future! :)
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ImafanofTororo Aug 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
So is this BEFORE Discord was evil?
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SJArt117 Aug 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, as you can see, he's just a teen! ^^
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ImafanofTororo Aug 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
ah okay.
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SJArt117 Aug 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Do you like it?
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ImafanofTororo Aug 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, I just wanted to be certain of the timeline. So, how old would you say Celestia is here?
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SJArt117 Aug 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well she's like over 1000 years old, so i'd say in her mid 100's

say 160years, represents 16years... I think discord may be something like 140? I'm not sure how old he is XD They're similar ages, anyway!
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I remember this when it was a mear idea :meow:
I'm so proud of you me SJ, you've come so far with it.

The background is supurb, and the shading on discord, it's faint, but maybe it's a fairly clound day over head ^^
dunno why, but black and white or that browny colour over the picture might look good, seen as it's from a long time ago XD

It's lovely :heart: Just like you :rose:
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SJArt117 Jul 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hehe! Thank you. I saw an element of critique squeezed in there too! :3

So happy you like it.
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I Love it ^^
Be proud :D
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SJArt117 Jul 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I am proooud!
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