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Morning Stroll - Celestiacord by SJArt117 Morning Stroll - Celestiacord by SJArt117
A piece I've been meaning to get done for a long while now, it's adolescent Celestia and Discord having a morning stroll in crisp fresh springtime.

For *PoshPete117


100%Mspaint.

(C) *S-J-Art MLPFIM Hasbro

Edit: Changed wings..

Edit.2: Changed mane colours slightly..
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Critique by ZontarZon Jul 1, 2012, 11:06:23 AM
"Morning Stroll" is a very cute picture, and what's more impressive is that it is made in 100% MS Paint. As many know, it takes an incredible amount of time and effort to create an MS Painting; as a fellow MS Painter, I fully understand this and respect S-J-Art for being so talented.

This picture looks a lot like the actual show, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. The style of the scenery and characters is incorporated perfectly in the background as well as in the anatomy and facial features of the characters. It is as if you are looking at a screenshot or a tidbit of the show itself.

As for other things, what I would recommend for change is the anatomy of Princess Celestia. Her back legs are proportioned in a very awkward way; that is, they are too high up in the air. Also, the curvature of a pony's back can also be better shown to improve the quality of Celestia's anatomy.

The wings on Celestia stem from a place that isn't the back. Rather, it seems as if they stem from the armpit...?

After seeing this picture, it occurred to me that you tried shading the characters. From what I see, the shading itself isn't the problem; it's that you can barely see that you have shaded. I would recommend that the shading be darker and easier to find.

Over all, it is very impressive. I am looking forward to seeing more of S-J-Art's works in the near future.
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Wow I live how this looks! I especially love how you did a wide screen touch to it!

Although there are somethings wrong with it that i would like to point out.

Celestia's Wings are awkwardly placed. I can see that she is flying upside down but i did not notice at first. Maybe you could make the wings a bit lower from the body?

Her hooves, when i say this i mean the one behind her head. At first i thought it was an awkwardly drawn ear because of its placing, maybe you could re place it so that you could see more of the arm?

Other than those few problems, this is a beautiful piece of work to had of been done in MS paint. I love everything else about it other than the few problems! (i especially love how you did your line work!

I hope my critique will help you in the future! :)
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ImafanofTororo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
So is this BEFORE Discord was evil?
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, as you can see, he's just a teen! ^^
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ImafanofTororo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
ah okay.
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Do you like it?
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ImafanofTororo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, I just wanted to be certain of the timeline. So, how old would you say Celestia is here?
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well she's like over 1000 years old, so i'd say in her mid 100's

say 160years, represents 16years... I think discord may be something like 140? I'm not sure how old he is XD They're similar ages, anyway!
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PoshPete117 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
I remember this when it was a mear idea :meow:
I'm so proud of you me SJ, you've come so far with it.

The background is supurb, and the shading on discord, it's faint, but maybe it's a fairly clound day over head ^^
dunno why, but black and white or that browny colour over the picture might look good, seen as it's from a long time ago XD

It's lovely :heart: Just like you :rose:
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hehe! Thank you. I saw an element of critique squeezed in there too! :3

So happy you like it.
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PoshPete117 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
I Love it ^^
Be proud :D
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I am proooud!
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PoshPete117 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
YAY!!!! ^^
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kuroiStar Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
It really would be nice if there was like a back-story to Celestia and Discord; their relationship between one another, what made them become enemies, stuff like that. From the episode, I can tell some things went on between them.
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, i totally agree!! That'd be amazing!
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trygveblacktiger Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yea i think Discord not have been evil in the past
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Same here, bro!
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MasterAnimash1996 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
It is good to see pictures of enemies being friends!!!
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I can second that! ^^

Thank you kindly for the comment!
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MasterAnimash1996 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
No Problem!!! Awesome work too!!!
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awwwww, thank yoooou! :glomp:
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MasterAnimash1996 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
NP!
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Drawing-Stars-02 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this :love:
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you kindly!
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PunkRoctorok Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww Celestia looks cute.
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Heheh, thank you!
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werecass Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Artist
Cute.
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
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werecass Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Artist
Your welcome.
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tunipeace Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i do not know what Hasbro and the hub are going to do with Discord and celestia. I just really really wish for them to have been friends at one time.

Mostly because he is a likable character.
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah ^^
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Ag3nt-T Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012   Digital Artist
"100% MSPaint"

Are you a wizard?
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:iconsjart117:
SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
That I am! ^^
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nbgodzilla86 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
good job on them i like it
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Aw! Thank you!
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nbgodzilla86 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
you're welcome
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ET033 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
u made tis on ms paint, 100% !
omg, ur my hero now!
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Eyup!

Thanks!

Hehehe! :blush:
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ET033 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcomes!=3
i feel inspired nao!
i use paint too=P
but im not that good...im better at paper...
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Aww, I'm so proud!

Me too, i love doodling traditionally.
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ET033 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=3
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Gabriel-Smith117 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Celestia and Discord? Being together?

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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
...lolwut?
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RGB64 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
This picture and those like it supply the headcanon that Discord is merely being imprisoned for being a stalker.
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
He's no stalker I believe.

I reckon Celly and he were close childhood friends.
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RGB64 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
I meant in his later years.
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ah.

Naaah, i think he could have possibly grown cold of celestia. He states "I've forgotten how grim you can be."

Suggesting he may have grown tired of her, and left.
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RGB64 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Which means he could have simply added "I'm outta here."
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SJArt117 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Maybe..
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