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Morning Stroll - Celestiacord

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A piece I've been meaning to get done for a long while now, it's adolescent Celestia and Discord having a morning stroll in crisp fresh springtime.

For *PoshPete117


100%Mspaint.

(C) *S-J-Art MLPFIM Hasbro

Edit: Changed wings..

Edit.2: Changed mane colours slightly..
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Wow I live how this looks! I especially love how you did a wide screen touch to it!

Although there are somethings wrong with it that i would like to point out.

Celestia's Wings are awkwardly placed. I can see that she is flying upside down but i did not notice at first. Maybe you could make the wings a bit lower from the body?

Her hooves, when i say this i mean the one behind her head. At first i thought it was an awkwardly drawn ear because of its placing, maybe you could re place it so that you could see more of the arm?

Other than those few problems, this is a beautiful piece of work to had of been done in MS paint. I love everything else about it other than the few problems! (i especially love how you did your line work!

I hope my critique will help you in the future! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>