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Although there are somethings wrong with it that i would like to point out.
Celestia's Wings are awkwardly placed. I can see that she is flying upside down but i did not notice at first. Maybe you could make the wings a bit lower from the body?
Her hooves, when i say this i mean the one behind her head. At first i thought it was an awkwardly drawn ear because of its placing, maybe you could re place it so that you could see more of the arm?
Other than those few problems, this is a beautiful piece of work to had of been done in MS paint. I love everything else about it other than the few problems! (i especially love how you did your line work!
I hope my critique will help you in the future!
This picture looks a lot like the actual show, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. The style of the scenery and characters is incorporated perfectly in the background as well as in the anatomy and facial features of the characters. It is as if you are looking at a screenshot or a tidbit of the show itself.
As for other things, what I would recommend for change is the anatomy of Princess Celestia. Her back legs are proportioned in a very awkward way; that is, they are too high up in the air. Also, the curvature of a pony's back can also be better shown to improve the quality of Celestia's anatomy.
The wings on Celestia stem from a place that isn't the back. Rather, it seems as if they stem from the armpit...?
After seeing this picture, it occurred to me that you tried shading the characters. From what I see, the shading itself isn't the problem; it's that you can barely see that you have shaded. I would recommend that the shading be darker and easier to find.
Over all, it is very impressive. I am looking forward to seeing more of S-J-Art's works in the near future.
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