Mystery Mint Pony Form

Hello there <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I think this is a very nice piece, with lots of originality in it. Anyway, so onto the critique. I believe the this pony looks bright and vivid, but could use a few improvements. Part of her pupil and a chunk of her iris is covered in gleam. Usually, (please do not get mad at me if I am wrong) the gleam is inside a bit of the pupil, but not covering the iris. I thought I should point that out, in case you are going for a traditional pony. I cannot complain about much else <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> her mane is beautiful, and the tail fits the style of the mane. If I would have to point out one more thing, it would be that the cutie mark seems to hang a bit low on her hip. I don't have much of a problem with it, but some may. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> overall, this art is very pretty. I love it, and I would want to see other Equestria Girls ponified by you as well <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>